Hey Bria! Your story sounds pretty cool. But maybe you should expand on your ideas a little more. Over all the plot sounds pretty solid. Best of luck withe your story, Kate on plot
on 9/29/13
Hi Bria: I am glad you think it is helpful to read these short stories because I do too. My story will also be made up. I am excited to see where your writing takes you in developing this short story. I know it will be interesting. You are such a great writer! Nice post! Sincerely, Katherine Ann on short stories
on 9/29/13
Your character has a strong voice and you depict it well. On the last sentence of the first paragraph fix 'Its' to 'it's'. Good Luck, Martine ✿ on Claire's Thoughts
on 9/25/13
Hi Bria! I really enjoyed your first paragraph. It really sounded like someone's thoughts! I like Teen Wolf too. It is so good! What other characteristics makes your character unique? Best Wishes, Katherine Ann. on Claire's Thoughts
on 9/22/13
Bria, I can totally relate, I'm also scared that people might dislike or insult my paper. The semi-public is definitely a relief, because less people will see it. Try to believe in your paper, and I guaranty that other's feel the exact same about their papers being public. Happy Blogging, Amanda P.S. I love the background on your blog! on e-book1 replies.
on 9/19/13
Hi Bria, your context if filled with very thoughtful and impressive dialogue! I wished i knew how to get mine that great! Bennett onDialogue
on 9/15/13
Hey Bria, your dialogue was very interesting! I could understand why you were protesting! Did this happen in real life because it seems that it could have. Happy Blogging, Omar Azmeh on Dialogue
on 9/9/13
I really like books like that too. Romance is really interesting because different couples share different qualities that make them a "couple" Please let me know how this is because if it is good i would love to read it and we can discuss later. on Reading Response
on 9/2/13
Hey Bria, I know how you feel! I've searched for concert tickets plenty of times in my teenage lifetime. Its quite a struggle. I really hope you get to go to the concert! Have fun! Katie on My Story
on 8/29/13
Hi Bria, I could feel your excitement! I hope you get to go to that concert! on My Story
on 8/25/13
Being a psychologist sounds really cool! Great post, i really liked it. I dont have any suggestions except to use a little less '!'s. onFree Post
on 8/25/13
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