Sunday, September 29, 2013

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  1. UnknownSeptember 29, 2013 at 3:48 PM

    Hey Bria!
    Your story sounds pretty cool. But maybe you should expand on your ideas a little more. Over all the plot sounds pretty solid.
    Best of luck withe your story,
    Kate

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  2. UnknownOctober 2, 2013 at 6:52 PM

    Your story seems interesting. Maybe add different aspects to make the characters mature.

    Good Luck,

    Martine ✿

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