In this draft I feel confident in my information. I think that I found a lot of valuable information from the websites that I found. The information was very helpful to me supporting my thesis. To find the information I used my research question which was helpful also. I am a little unsure about my wording and my sentence structure. Even though I worked on it for an hour I feel like it could have been better but I just need a little help with that before I turn my final draft in.
What was easy for me was finding all of the information I needed for supporting my thesis. I found it easy because it of my research question was good so I got good information. Something that was hard was just mechanical errors and trying to fix them. I would just like help with my sentence structure as I mention earlier. I should focus my reading of the feedback on the transitions and how I word things in my paper.
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